Re: [TLS] WGLC for "Deprecating TLSv1.0 and TLSv1.1"

"Martin Thomson" <mt@lowentropy.net> Sat, 13 April 2019 04:15 UTC

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Date: Sat, 13 Apr 2019 00:15:55 -0400
From: "Martin Thomson" <mt@lowentropy.net>
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Subject: Re: [TLS] WGLC for "Deprecating TLSv1.0 and TLSv1.1"
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Section 1.1 doesn't say *how* those listed documents are updated.  Might pay to include a few works on how.

Section 2 can be cut down a lot.  The quote from another document is longer than the rest of the text.  In many ways, saying that the IETF is moving last is not a great thing to memorialize in RFC, as much as it is useful in an Internet-Draft or in argumentation in support of publication of the doc.

The title of Section 3 could be a bit clearer.

It might pay to explain what RFC 7525 is in Section 6.  Why does that document warrant special attention over the 70-odd other ones.

Otherwise, publish this.



On Sat, Apr 13, 2019, at 09:28, Christopher Wood wrote:
> This is the working group last call for the "Deprecating TLSv1.0 and 
> TLSv1.1” draft available at:
> 
>     https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-tls-oldversions-deprecate/
> 
> Please review the document and send your comments to the list by April 26, 2019.
> 
> Thanks,
> Chris, Joe, and Sean
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