Re: [TLS] [Technical Errata Reported] RFC5288 (4694)

Peter Gutmann <pgut001@cs.auckland.ac.nz> Mon, 16 May 2016 04:02 UTC

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From: Peter Gutmann <pgut001@cs.auckland.ac.nz>
To: Atul Luykx <Atul.Luykx@esat.kuleuven.be>
Thread-Topic: [TLS] [Technical Errata Reported] RFC5288 (4694)
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Subject: Re: [TLS] [Technical Errata Reported] RFC5288 (4694)
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Atul Luykx <Atul.Luykx@esat.kuleuven.be> writes:

>Here's a possible re-write of the second paragraph:

That looks good.

Peter.