[TLS] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-tls-tls13-cert-with-extern-psk-03

Ines Robles via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> Mon, 02 December 2019 23:59 UTC

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Reviewer: Ines Robles
Review result: Ready

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Document: draft-ietf-tls-tls13-cert-with-extern-psk-??
Reviewer: Ines Robles
Review Date: 2019-12-02
IETF LC End Date: 2019-12-02
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat

Summary:

The document is well written.

This document specifies a TLS 1.3 extension permitting certificate-based server
authentication to be combined with an external PSK as an input to the TLS 1.3
key schedule.

Major issues: Not found

Minor issues: Not found

Nits/editorial comments:

I think that would be nice to add in IANA Considerations a table specifying the
fields of the TLS ExtensionType Values indicated in
https://www.iana.org/assignments/tls-extensiontype-values/tls-extensiontype-values.xhtml

Thank you for this document,

Ines.