[TLS]Re: I-D Action: draft-ietf-tls-svcb-ech-04.txt

"Salz, Rich" <rsalz@akamai.com> Tue, 20 August 2024 17:00 UTC

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From: "Salz, Rich" <rsalz@akamai.com>
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Subject: [TLS]Re: I-D Action: draft-ietf-tls-svcb-ech-04.txt
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I read the document [1].  I think it's ready for WGLC. I suggest one change. I find the use of "bootstrapping" in the title misleading.  I suggest "Enabling TLS Encrypted ClientHello via DNS Service Bindings."

[1] https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-tls-svcb-ech/