Re: [Drip] New Version Notification for draft-ietf-drip-arch-10.txt(Internet mail)

Hi Daniel and Med

Wondering if we have a public Github repo? If not, would like me to put the draft in my personal Github?

Just minutes ago, version 11 was uploaded with the help of IETF secretary. Version 11 addresses the terminology explanations in section 3.3 as Stu pointed out.

Best,
Shuai

From: Tm-rid <tm-rid-bounces@ietf.org> on behalf of Daniel Migault <mglt.ietf@gmail.com>
Date: Tuesday, February 23, 2021 at 5:45 AM
To: shuai zhao <shuai.zhao@ieee.org>
Cc: "tm-rid@ietf.org" <tm-rid@ietf.org>
Subject: Re: [Drip] New Version Notification for draft-ietf-drip-arch-10.txt(Internet mail)

great thanks for the update. If you are using markdown I am wondering if you could upload the mark down version on github. If not you may upload xml and txt as we are likely to comment on the txt version.

Yours,
Daniel

On Mon, Feb 22, 2021 at 4:57 PM shuai zhao <shuai.zhao@ieee.org<mailto:shuai.zhao@ieee.org>> wrote:
Much thanks to Stu and Adam for your review and proposed text, -10 addressed ~70 comments summarized as following:
· To better align with reqs-, replace “UAS Remote ID” with “DRIP entity identifier” where I see fit
· Per authors’ agreement, we removed section 7 “DRIP transactions enabling trustworthy” since it was more for solution space. The removed text may end up in the new drip register draft. TBD.
· Lots of language tune-up, especially removed the normative wording in sections 4, 5, 6 and 7 per AD’s previous review.
· Added a new reference to FAA concept of operation v2.0 which is used in Annex A.1
· Address comments regarding FAA Final Rule in the draft
· Capitalize each “observer” to “Observer”.
· Updated description text for network RID in sec 1.2.2

Since we are closing to WGLC, please review it and provide concrete comments if you see something you don’t like.  See you all at IETF 110. :)

Best,
Shuai

On Feb 22, 2021, at 1:44 PM, internet-drafts@ietf.org<mailto:internet-drafts@ietf.org> wrote:

A new version of I-D, draft-ietf-drip-arch-10.txt
has been successfully submitted by Shuai Zhao and posted to the
IETF repository.

Name: draft-ietf-drip-arch
Revision: 10
Title: Drone Remote Identification Protocol (DRIP) Architecture
Document date: 2021-02-22
Group: drip
Pages: 22
URL:            https://www.ietf.org/archive/id/draft-ietf-drip-arch-10.txt
Status:         https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-drip-arch/
Htmlized:       https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-drip-arch
Htmlized:       https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-drip-arch-10
Diff:           https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-drip-arch-10

Abstract:
  This document defines an architecture for protocols and services to
  support Unmanned Aircraft System Remote Identification and tracking
  (UAS RID), plus RID-related communications, including required
  architectural building blocks and their interfaces.

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