Re: [Drip] AD review of draft-ietf-drip-rid

Robert Moskowitz <rgm@labs.htt-consult.com> Mon, 11 April 2022 12:59 UTC

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Subject: Re: [Drip] AD review of draft-ietf-drip-rid
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Responses inline.

On 4/11/22 07:38, mohamed.boucadair@orange.com wrote:
>
> Hi Éric,
>
> Thank you for the careful AD review.
>
> Please see below for one specific point.
>
> Cheers,
>
> Med
>
> *De :* Tm-rid <tm-rid-bounces@ietf.org> *De la part de* Eric Vyncke 
> (evyncke)
> *Envoyé :* lundi 11 avril 2022 12:58
> *À :* tm-rid@ietf.org
> *Cc :* draft-ietf-drip-rid@ietf.org
> *Objet :* [Drip] AD review of draft-ietf-drip-rid
>
> Hi,
>
> Thanks to the authors, shepherd, and the DRIP WG for producing this 
> 3rd I-D. And, I appreciate that the comments from iotdir, secdir, 
> cfrg, .. were taken into accounts :-)
>
> As usual, here is my AD review before going to the IETF Last Call and 
> continuing the publication process. Except noted by a "***", all the 
> comments can be ignored but I would appreciate a reply telling "we 
> have read your comment but prefer to ignore" (or a variation of this 
> text).
>
> I hope this helps improving the document and ease the publication process.
>
> Regards
>
> -éric
>
> ---- review below
>
> */[snip] /*…
>
> # Sec 11.2
>
> *** F3411 & drip-registries & CTA2063A & RFC 8032 should probably be 
> normative.
>
> */[Med] You are probably right for RFC8032. The good news is that it 
> is already listed in https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/downref/. /*
>

Normative.

> *//*
>
> *//*
>
> */F3411 is cited once to call out the various types. Reading that 
> document is not required to understand or implement HHITs/DETs. /*
>
> *//*
>
> */Idem for drip-registries. What is important from an interoperability 
> standpoint is to unambiguously identify a DET. This is done by means 
> of the prefix part. How the RAA/HDA parts are assigned does not 
> actually matter. /*
>
> *//*
>
> */I’m neutral on CTA2063A./*
>

All informative, IMHO.  Sec 4.2 is how to do DET within CTA2063A if this 
is your representational mode.  Everything about 2063A is included in 
this section, except how to register with ICAO to get a Manf code (with 
is not specified by CTA).  Thus the reader does not need the CTA document.