[Drip] Shepherd Review of draft-ietf-drip-reqs-06

mohamed.boucadair@orange.com Tue, 24 November 2020 08:00 UTC

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Hi Stu, Adam, Bob, and Andrei,

Please find in the following links my review as a document Shepherd of draft-ietf-drip-reqs-06:

*         doc: https://github.com/boucadair/IETF-Drafts-Reviews/raw/master/draft-ietf-drip-reqs-06-rev%20Med.docx

*         pdf: https://github.com/boucadair/IETF-Drafts-Reviews/blob/master/draft-ietf-drip-reqs-06-rev%20Med.pdf

Even if there are +40 comments, these are easy to fix. A major one from a shepherd view is to check whether F3411-19 is to be cited as normative.

Please prepare and submit an updated version that takes into account this review. Once done, we will continue with the publication process.

Thank you.

Cheers,
Med (document Shepherd)


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