Re: [Drip] New Version Notification for draft-ietf-drip-arch-10.txt

great thanks for the update. If you are using markdown I am wondering if
you could upload the mark down version on github. If not you may upload xml
and txt as we are likely to comment on the txt version.

Yours,
Daniel

On Mon, Feb 22, 2021 at 4:57 PM shuai zhao <shuai.zhao@ieee.org> wrote:

> Much thanks to Stu and Adam for your review and proposed text, -10
> addressed ~70 comments summarized as following:
>
>    - To better align with reqs-, replace “UAS Remote ID” with “DRIP
>    entity identifier” where I see fit
>    - Per authors’ agreement, we removed section 7 “DRIP transactions
>    enabling trustworthy” since it was more for solution space. The removed
>    text may end up in the new drip register draft. TBD.
>    - Lots of language tune-up, especially removed the normative wording
>    in sections 4, 5, 6 and 7 per AD’s previous review.
>    - Added a new reference to FAA concept of operation v2.0 which is used
>    in Annex A.1
>    - Address comments regarding FAA Final Rule in the draft
>    - Capitalize each “observer” to “Observer”.
>    - Updated description text for network RID in sec 1.2.2
>
>
> Since we are closing to WGLC, please review it and provide concrete
> comments if you see something you don’t like.  See you all at IETF 110. :)
>
> Best,
> Shuai
>
>
> On Feb 22, 2021, at 1:44 PM, internet-drafts@ietf.org wrote:
>
>
> A new version of I-D, draft-ietf-drip-arch-10.txt
> has been successfully submitted by Shuai Zhao and posted to the
> IETF repository.
>
> Name: draft-ietf-drip-arch
> Revision: 10
> Title: Drone Remote Identification Protocol (DRIP) Architecture
> Document date: 2021-02-22
> Group: drip
> Pages: 22
> URL:
> https://www.ietf.org/archive/id/draft-ietf-drip-arch-10.txt
> Status:         https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-drip-arch/
> Htmlized:       https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-drip-arch
> Htmlized:       https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-drip-arch-10
> Diff:           https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-drip-arch-10
>
> Abstract:
>   This document defines an architecture for protocols and services to
>   support Unmanned Aircraft System Remote Identification and tracking
>   (UAS RID), plus RID-related communications, including required
>   architectural building blocks and their interfaces.
>
>
>
>
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