Re: [Drip] New Version Notification for draft-ietf-drip-arch-10.txt(Internet mail)

Daniel Migault <mglt.ietf@gmail.com> Tue, 23 February 2021 17:05 UTC

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Subject: Re: [Drip] New Version Notification for draft-ietf-drip-arch-10.txt(Internet mail)
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Hi,

Please find the git repo for the WG. Feel free to request access or give me
your github login so I can add you.

https://github.com/ietf-wg-drip

Yours,
Daniel

On Tue, Feb 23, 2021 at 11:58 AM shuaiizhao(Shuai Zhao) <
shuaiizhao@tencent.com> wrote:

> Hi Daniel and Med
>
>
>
> Wondering if we have a public Github repo? If not, would like me to put
> the draft in my personal Github?
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> Just minutes ago, version 11 was uploaded with the help of IETF secretary.
> Version 11 addresses the terminology explanations in section 3.3 as Stu
> pointed out.
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> Best,
>
> Shuai
>
>
>
> *From: *Tm-rid <tm-rid-bounces@ietf.org> on behalf of Daniel Migault <
> mglt.ietf@gmail.com>
> *Date: *Tuesday, February 23, 2021 at 5:45 AM
> *To: *shuai zhao <shuai.zhao@ieee.org>
> *Cc: *"tm-rid@ietf.org" <tm-rid@ietf.org>
> *Subject: *Re: [Drip] New Version Notification for
> draft-ietf-drip-arch-10.txt(Internet mail)
>
>
>
> great thanks for the update. If you are using markdown I am wondering if
> you could upload the mark down version on github. If not you may upload xml
> and txt as we are likely to comment on the txt version.
>
>
>
> Yours,
>
> Daniel
>
>
>
> On Mon, Feb 22, 2021 at 4:57 PM shuai zhao <shuai.zhao@ieee.org> wrote:
>
> Much thanks to Stu and Adam for your review and proposed text, -10
> addressed ~70 comments summarized as following:
>
> · To better align with reqs-, replace “UAS Remote ID” with “DRIP entity
> identifier” where I see fit
>
> · Per authors’ agreement, we removed section 7 “DRIP transactions
> enabling trustworthy” since it was more for solution space. The removed
> text may end up in the new drip register draft. TBD.
>
> · Lots of language tune-up, especially removed the normative wording in
> sections 4, 5, 6 and 7 per AD’s previous review.
>
> · Added a new reference to FAA concept of operation v2.0 which is used in
> Annex A.1
>
> · Address comments regarding FAA Final Rule in the draft
>
> · Capitalize each “observer” to “Observer”.
>
> · Updated description text for network RID in sec 1.2.2
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>
>
> Since we are closing to WGLC, please review it and provide concrete
> comments if you see something you don’t like.  See you all at IETF 110. :)
>
>
>
> Best,
>
> Shuai
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> On Feb 22, 2021, at 1:44 PM, internet-drafts@ietf.org wrote:
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> A new version of I-D, draft-ietf-drip-arch-10.txt
> has been successfully submitted by Shuai Zhao and posted to the
> IETF repository.
>
> Name: draft-ietf-drip-arch
> Revision: 10
> Title: Drone Remote Identification Protocol (DRIP) Architecture
> Document date: 2021-02-22
> Group: drip
> Pages: 22
> URL:
> https://www.ietf.org/archive/id/draft-ietf-drip-arch-10.txt
> Status:         https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-drip-arch/
> Htmlized:       https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-drip-arch
> Htmlized:       https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-drip-arch-10
> Diff:           https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-drip-arch-10
>
> Abstract:
>   This document defines an architecture for protocols and services to
>   support Unmanned Aircraft System Remote Identification and tracking
>   (UAS RID), plus RID-related communications, including required
>   architectural building blocks and their interfaces.
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> Please note that it may take a couple of minutes from the time of
> submission
> until the htmlized version and diff are available at tools.ietf.org.
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