Re: [Drip] New Version Notification for draft-ietf-drip-arch-10.txt(Internet mail)
Daniel Migault <mglt.ietf@gmail.com> Tue, 23 February 2021 17:05 UTC
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From: Daniel Migault <mglt.ietf@gmail.com>
Date: Tue, 23 Feb 2021 12:05:06 -0500
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Subject: Re: [Drip] New Version Notification for draft-ietf-drip-arch-10.txt(Internet mail)
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Hi, Please find the git repo for the WG. Feel free to request access or give me your github login so I can add you. https://github.com/ietf-wg-drip Yours, Daniel On Tue, Feb 23, 2021 at 11:58 AM shuaiizhao(Shuai Zhao) < shuaiizhao@tencent.com> wrote: > Hi Daniel and Med > > > > Wondering if we have a public Github repo? If not, would like me to put > the draft in my personal Github? > > > > Just minutes ago, version 11 was uploaded with the help of IETF secretary. > Version 11 addresses the terminology explanations in section 3.3 as Stu > pointed out. > > > > Best, > > Shuai > > > > *From: *Tm-rid <tm-rid-bounces@ietf.org> on behalf of Daniel Migault < > mglt.ietf@gmail.com> > *Date: *Tuesday, February 23, 2021 at 5:45 AM > *To: *shuai zhao <shuai.zhao@ieee.org> > *Cc: *"tm-rid@ietf.org" <tm-rid@ietf.org> > *Subject: *Re: [Drip] New Version Notification for > draft-ietf-drip-arch-10.txt(Internet mail) > > > > great thanks for the update. If you are using markdown I am wondering if > you could upload the mark down version on github. If not you may upload xml > and txt as we are likely to comment on the txt version. > > > > Yours, > > Daniel > > > > On Mon, Feb 22, 2021 at 4:57 PM shuai zhao <shuai.zhao@ieee.org> wrote: > > Much thanks to Stu and Adam for your review and proposed text, -10 > addressed ~70 comments summarized as following: > > · To better align with reqs-, replace “UAS Remote ID” with “DRIP entity > identifier” where I see fit > > · Per authors’ agreement, we removed section 7 “DRIP transactions > enabling trustworthy” since it was more for solution space. The removed > text may end up in the new drip register draft. TBD. > > · Lots of language tune-up, especially removed the normative wording in > sections 4, 5, 6 and 7 per AD’s previous review. > > · Added a new reference to FAA concept of operation v2.0 which is used in > Annex A.1 > > · Address comments regarding FAA Final Rule in the draft > > · Capitalize each “observer” to “Observer”. > > · Updated description text for network RID in sec 1.2.2 > > > > Since we are closing to WGLC, please review it and provide concrete > comments if you see something you don’t like. See you all at IETF 110. :) > > > > Best, > > Shuai > > > > > > On Feb 22, 2021, at 1:44 PM, internet-drafts@ietf.org wrote: > > > > > A new version of I-D, draft-ietf-drip-arch-10.txt > has been successfully submitted by Shuai Zhao and posted to the > IETF repository. > > Name: draft-ietf-drip-arch > Revision: 10 > Title: Drone Remote Identification Protocol (DRIP) Architecture > Document date: 2021-02-22 > Group: drip > Pages: 22 > URL: > https://www.ietf.org/archive/id/draft-ietf-drip-arch-10.txt > Status: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-drip-arch/ > Htmlized: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-drip-arch > Htmlized: https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-drip-arch-10 > Diff: https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-drip-arch-10 > > Abstract: > This document defines an architecture for protocols and services to > support Unmanned Aircraft System Remote Identification and tracking > (UAS RID), plus RID-related communications, including required > architectural building blocks and their interfaces. > > > > > Please note that it may take a couple of minutes from the time of > submission > until the htmlized version and diff are available at tools.ietf.org. > > The IETF Secretariat > > > > -- > Tm-rid mailing list > Tm-rid@ietf.org > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/tm-rid > > > > > -- > > Daniel Migault > > Ericsson > -- Daniel Migault Ericsson
- Re: [Drip] New Version Notification for draft-iet… shuai zhao
- Re: [Drip] New Version Notification for draft-iet… Daniel Migault
- Re: [Drip] New Version Notification for draft-iet… shuaiizhao(Shuai Zhao)
- Re: [Drip] New Version Notification for draft-iet… Daniel Migault