RE: IESG commet on draft-ietf-trade-iotp-v1.0-papi-05/06
Eastlake III Donald-LDE008 <Donald.Eastlake@motorola.com> Wed, 24 March 2004 21:34 UTC
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From: Eastlake III Donald-LDE008 <Donald.Eastlake@motorola.com>
Subject: RE: IESG commet on draft-ietf-trade-iotp-v1.0-papi-05/06
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Hi, Yes, those looks like exactly the right changes. I will post the draft and notify our new area director, Scott Hollenbeck. We will see if there are any other objections but I hope that with this change it can be approved quickly. Thanks, Donald =========================================================== Donald E. Eastlake III Donald.Eastlake@Motorola.com Motorola Laboratories 1-508-786-7554 (work) 111 Locke Drive 1-508-634-2066 (home) Marlboro, MA 01752 USA -----Original Message----- From: Masaaki Hiroya [mailto:hiroya@st.rim.or.jp] Sent: Tuesday, March 23, 2004 9:23 PM To: Eastlake III Donald-LDE008 Cc: ykawatsu@itg.hitachi.co.jp; hiroya@st.rim.or.jp Subject: Re: IESG commet on draft-ietf-trade-iotp-v1.0-papi-05 Hello Mr. Eastlake I'm not sure how I should respond to the IESG comment on I-D draft, but I attached the updated version of I-D draft. The updated parts are as follows: (OLD)(draft-ietf-trade-iotp-v1.0-papi-05) MerchantData Any merchant related data that might be used by the IOTP Payment Bridge for different purposes, e.g., it might contain access keys to some mall keys. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Its declaration coincides with the Packaged Content's declaration (cf. IOTP Specification). (NEW)(draft-ietf-trade-iotp-v1.0-papi-06) MerchantData Any merchant related data that might be used by the IOTP Payment Bridge for different purposes, e.g., it might contain IDs to access some mall data, ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ but not cryptographic keys. Its Packaged ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ declaration coincides with the Content's declaration (cf. IOTP Specification). I think this correction covers the IESG comment. Besides, I updated the Author's Address section as follows: (OLD) Yoshiaki Kawatsura Hitachi, Ltd. 890 Kashimada Saiwai-ku Kawasaki-shi Kanagawa, Japan 212-8567 E-mail: kawatura@bisd.hitachi.co.jp (NEW) Yoshiaki Kawatsura Hitachi, Ltd. 890 Kashimada Saiwai-ku Kawasaki-shi Kanagawa, Japan 212-8567 E-mail: ykawatsu@itg.hitachi.co.jp ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ (OLD) Masaaki Hiroya Technoinfo Service, Inc. 1155-6-206 Ichigao-cho Aoba-ku, Yokohama Kanagawa 225-0024 JAPAN Phone: +81-45-978-4522 Email: hiroya@st.rim.or.jp (NEW) Masaaki Hiroya Technoinfo Service, Inc. 333-2-718 Uchikoshi-machi ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Hachioji-shi ~~~~~~~~~~~~ Tokyo 192-0911 JAPAN ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Email: hiroya@st.rim.or.jp If there is something else I should do, please let me know. Best Regards Masaaki At 04/03/16 14:06, Eastlake III Donald-LDE008 wrote: >The IESG has provided the following comment on > draft-ietf-trade-iotp-v1.0-papi-05 > >"The use of MerchantData makes me nervous. The level of abstraction makes >it difficult to tell, but I think that MerchantData can contain plaintext >cryptographic keys, which would be very poor design." > >We need to respond to this comment. ----- Masaaki Hiroya hiroya@st.rim.or.jp
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