Re: [tram] I-D Action: draft-ietf-tram-turnbis-19.txt

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From: "Konda, Tirumaleswar Reddy" <TirumaleswarReddy_Konda@McAfee.com>
To: Justin Uberti <juberti=40google.com@dmarc.ietf.org>
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Thanks Justin. Fixed in my local copy.

-Tiru

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The revised text in Section 2.3 LGTM.

I noticed the acknowledgements section (Section 23) refers to SSODA, but this name doesn't appear elsewhere in the document. Perhaps it should say "the ADDITIONAL-ADDRESS-FAMILY mechanism"?

On Sun, Jun 3, 2018 at 11:24 PM Konda, Tirumaleswar Reddy <TirumaleswarReddy_Konda@mcafee.com<mailto:TirumaleswarReddy_Konda@mcafee.com>> wrote:
This revision addresses comments from Justin.

-Tiru

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> This draft is a work item of the TURN Revised and Modernized WG of the IETF.
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>         Title           : Traversal Using Relays around NAT (TURN): Relay Extensions
> to Session Traversal Utilities for NAT (STUN)
>         Authors         : Tirumaleswar Reddy
>                           Alan Johnston
>                           Philip Matthews
>                           Jonathan Rosenberg
>       Filename        : draft-ietf-tram-turnbis-19.txt
>       Pages           : 84
>       Date            : 2018-06-03
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> Abstract:
>    If a host is located behind a NAT, then in certain situations it can
>    be impossible for that host to communicate directly with other hosts
>    (peers).  In these situations, it is necessary for the host to use
>    the services of an intermediate node that acts as a communication
>    relay.  This specification defines a protocol, called TURN (Traversal
>    Using Relays around NAT), that allows the host to control the
>    operation of the relay and to exchange packets with its peers using
>    the relay.  TURN differs from some other relay control protocols in
>    that it allows a client to communicate with multiple peers using a
>    single relay address.
>
>    The TURN protocol was designed to be used as part of the ICE
>    (Interactive Connectivity Establishment) approach to NAT traversal,
>    though it also can be used without ICE.
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>    This document obsoletes RFC 5766 and RFC 6156.
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