[tram] Suresh Krishnan's No Objection on draft-ietf-tram-turnbis-27: (with COMMENT)

Suresh Krishnan via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> Wed, 10 July 2019 14:03 UTC

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* Section 3.7

I think an informative reference to [draft-ietf-intarea-frag-fragile] would be
very useful here. It is a BCP that covers this issue in great detail and has
specific recommendations for different audiences.

* Section 13.2 Page 53

"If the packet is being sent to the peer"

The term "the packet" is ambiguous here. This could potentially refer to the
ICMPv6 packet being sent or the original packet that caused the error. Can you
please clarify which one you mean here?

* References

I do have a better citation for the Fragmentation Considered Harmful paper if
you want to use it.

   [Kent]     Kent, C. and J. Mogul, ""Fragmentation Considered
              Harmful", In Proc. SIGCOMM '87 Workshop on Frontiers in
              Computer Communications Technology, DOI
              10.1145/55483.55524", August 1987,
              <http://www.hpl.hp.com/techreports/Compaq-DEC/
              WRL-87-3.pdf>.