[trill] Shepherd's report on draft-ietf-trill-ecn-support-04
"Susan Hares" <shares@ndzh.com> Mon, 22 January 2018 15:18 UTC
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Subject: [trill] Shepherd's report on draft-ietf-trill-ecn-support-04
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As part of the shepherd's duties, I've review draft-ietf-trill-ecn-support-04.txt to determine if it is ready for publication. Status: Ready with editorial nits General comment: I'm thrilled to see an RBridge specification enacting aids for advanced congestion control mechanisms. What I've checked: normative references including draft-ietf-twvwg-enc-encap-guidelines-01/txt Editorial nits are below. You can adopt or ignore the editorial nits. Sue Hares =========== Editorial nits: General - it may be helpful to specify section in the [ECNencapGuide] - document, and RFC7567. While the way you specify it is correct, it may help the reader to narrow down the scope within the document. #1 Explicit congestion notification (ECN [RFC3168 <https://tools.ietf.org/html/rfc3168> ]) allows a forwarding element, such as a router, to notify downstream devices, including the destination, of the onset of congestion without having to drop packets. The multiple commons in this sentence do not lend to easy reading of the initial sentence. One alternative is: Explicit congestion notification (ECN [RFC3168 <https://tools.ietf.org/html/rfc3168> ]) allows a forwarding Element (such as a router) to notify downstream devices, including the destination, of the onset of congestion without having to drop packets. However you may wish to revise the sentence in an alternative way. #2 - Section 2. Paragraph 2. Sentences 4 Old/Extesnion Flags Word./ New/Extension Flags Word./ #3 - Section 3.3 is dense and thoughtful text. I am not sure you can improve it, but it too me several reads to make sure I understood it correctly.
- [trill] Shepherd's report on draft-ietf-trill-ecn… Susan Hares
- Re: [trill] Shepherd's report on draft-ietf-trill… Bob Briscoe
- Re: [trill] Shepherd's report on draft-ietf-trill… Donald Eastlake