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Re: [trill] [Lime] Adoption call for draft-deepak-trill-yang-pm (12/15/2014 to 12/30/2014)

"Deepak Kumar (dekumar)" <dekumar@cisco.com> Tue, 16 December 2014 16:15 UTC

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From: "Deepak Kumar (dekumar)" <dekumar@cisco.com>
To: "Carlos Pignataro (cpignata)" <cpignata@cisco.com>, Susan Hares <shares@ndzh.com>
Thread-Topic: [Lime] Adoption call for draft-deepak-trill-yang-pm (12/15/2014 to 12/30/2014)
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Subject: Re: [trill] [Lime] Adoption call for draft-deepak-trill-yang-pm (12/15/2014 to 12/30/2014)
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Thanks for comments. I will fix them and submit new version of draft for review.

Thanks,
Deepak

From: "Carlos Pignataro (cpignata)" <cpignata@cisco.com<mailto:cpignata@cisco.com>>
Date: Tuesday, December 16, 2014 7:03 AM
To: Susan Hares <shares@ndzh.com<mailto:shares@ndzh.com>>
Cc: "d3e3e3@gmail.com<mailto:d3e3e3@gmail.com>" <d3e3e3@gmail.com<mailto:d3e3e3@gmail.com>>, "jon.hudson@gmail.com<mailto:jon.hudson@gmail.com>" <jon.hudson@gmail.com<mailto:jon.hudson@gmail.com>>, "lime@ietf.org<mailto:lime@ietf.org>" <lime@ietf.org<mailto:lime@ietf.org>>, "trill@ietf.org<mailto:trill@ietf.org>" <trill@ietf.org<mailto:trill@ietf.org>>
Subject: Re: [Lime] Adoption call for draft-deepak-trill-yang-pm (12/15/2014 to 12/30/2014)

Sue, Jon,

I have a few concerns with this document:

  *   The Abstract says “It extends Yang Data Model for TRILL OAM [TRILLOAMYANG]”, however, [TRILLOAMYANG] is listed as an Informative reference — I believe it should be Normative (all the definitions are coming from it, and this doc extends that model)
     *   It seems the same issue exists with draft-ietf-trill-yang-oam and [GENYANGOAM], which should be Normative there.
     *   By the way, a nit as well (the Abstract includes citations).
  *   Ditto for [GENYANGOAM], as the text says “In this document we extend the YANG model defined in [GENYANGOAM]”
  *   There’s a non-insignificant set of Nits which frankly should be taken care of before this call for adoption (see http://www.ietf.org/tools/idnits?url=http://www.ietf.org/archive/id/draft-deepak-trill-yang-pm-00.txt)
     *   This severely detracts from readability.

I believe these are blocking for adoption.

Thanks,

Carlos.

On Dec 15, 2014, at 11:05 PM, Susan Hares <shares@ndzh.com<mailto:shares@ndzh.com>> wrote:

This begins a 2 week WG adoption call for draft-deepak-trill-yang-pm-00 which can be found at:

http://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-deepak-trill-yang-pm/

This draft will be reviewed along with other yang modules at the 12/17/2014 interim of trill held from 9-10pm ET (6-7pm PT, 10-11am Beijing on 12/18/2014).  In your review, please indicate the following:  a) if this yang module provides information necessary to manage or monitor TRILL, and b) if you support adoption this work into the TRILL WG.

Sue Hares and Jon Hudson
Co-chairs


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