[trill] Joel Jaeggli's No Objection on draft-ietf-trill-oam-mib-07: (with COMMENT)
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Subject: [trill] Joel Jaeggli's No Objection on draft-ietf-trill-oam-mib-07: (with COMMENT)
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Joel Jaeggli has entered the following ballot position for draft-ietf-trill-oam-mib-07: No Objection When responding, please keep the subject line intact and reply to all email addresses included in the To and CC lines. (Feel free to cut this introductory paragraph, however.) Please refer to https://www.ietf.org/iesg/statement/discuss-criteria.html for more information about IESG DISCUSS and COMMENT positions. The document, along with other ballot positions, can be found here: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-trill-oam-mib/ ---------------------------------------------------------------------- COMMENT: ---------------------------------------------------------------------- Melinda Shore did the opsdir review. would like to see the question of the security considerations setion addressed. ---- I have reviewed this document as part of the Operational directorate's ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG. These comments were written with the intent of improving the operational aspects of the IETF drafts. Comments that are not addressed in last call may be included in AD reviews during the IESG review. Document editors and WG chairs should treat these comments just like any other last call comments. Summary: The document is in good basic shape, with some weaknesses in the security considerations. I'd like to see those remedied but I'm not sure they're serious enough to recommend blocking publication. This document specifies a MIB for TRILL. This document has been received MIB doctor review and issues raised during that review have been been resolved. The security considerations section is weak, but not fatally so. The draft identifies exposing MAC addresses as a potential privacy issue but does not identify other security considerations specific to this particular MIB module, which is unfortunate given the inclusion of writable objects. More specificity about which security mechanisms to use might help avoid interoperability problems. Also, in this climate it may be useful to separate out the privacy issues into a "Privacy Considerations" subsection. The nits checker found: . two instances of non-RFC5735-compliant IPv4 addresses . a missing reference to CFM. This one is wrong - CFM is identified and a reference provided in the Introduction (section 1) Melinda
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