[trill] AD review of draft-ietf-trill-smart-endnodes-07
Alia Atlas <akatlas@gmail.com> Mon, 19 February 2018 16:04 UTC
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Subject: [trill] AD review of draft-ietf-trill-smart-endnodes-07
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As is customary, I have done my AD review of draft-ietf-trill-smart-endnodes-07. First, I would like to thank the authors - Radia, Fangwei, Donald, Kesava, and Ting - for their work on this draft. I have no substantive comments, though a few nits are below. When I have received the shepherd's report, I will put this into IETF Last Call and target it for the March 8 telechat. Nits: a) Sec 3: "The Smart Endnode solution proposed in this document " - should be "defined" or such instead of "proposed". b) Sec 3: "smart ennodes which can encapsulate" - "ennodes" should be "endnodes" c) Sec 3: "capbillity" should be capability d) Sec 5.2: "endnod's" shoould be "endnode's" Regards, Alia