Re: [trill] [RTG-DIR] RtgDir Review: draft-ietf-trill-centralized-replication-05

Alia Atlas <akatlas@gmail.com> Thu, 02 June 2016 02:41 UTC

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From: Alia Atlas <akatlas@gmail.com>
To: "Keyur Patel (keyupate)" <keyupate@cisco.com>
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Subject: Re: [trill] [RTG-DIR] RtgDir Review: draft-ietf-trill-centralized-replication-05
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Hi Keyur,

Thank you very much for your review.

Regards,
Alia

On Wed, Apr 27, 2016 at 6:30 PM, Keyur Patel (keyupate) <keyupate@cisco.com>
wrote:

> Hello,
>
> I have been selected as the Routing Directorate reviewer for this draft.
> The Routing Directorate seeks to review all routing or routing-related
> drafts as they pass through IETF last call and IESG review, and sometimes
> on special request. The purpose of the review is to provide assistance to
> the Routing ADs. For more information about the Routing Directorate, please
> see ​http://trac.tools.ietf.org/area/rtg/trac/wiki/RtgDir.
>
> Although these comments are primarily for the use of the Routing ADs, it
> would be helpful if you could consider them along with any other IETF Last
> Call comments that you receive, and strive to resolve them through
> discussion or by updating the draft.
>
> Document: draft-ietf-trill-centralized-replication-05
> Reviewer: Keyur Patel
> Review Date: 27-Apr-2016
> Intended Status: Standards Track
>
>
> Summary:
> The document is well written and seems ready for the publication. No major
> issues found. Minor nits are listed below.
>
> Major Issues:
> None.
>
> Minor Issues
>
>
>    1. Intended Status: "Standards Track" Please.
>    2.
>
>    Section 1, 3 paragraph: S/will be described/is described.
>    3.
>
>    Section 11.1, Do you need to define any error conditions where
>    multiple flag bits are set?
>
>
> Regards,
> Keyur
>