Re: [trill] WG Last Call: draft-ietf-trill-fine-labeling-02.txt

Hi Rajeev,

On Wed, Nov 14, 2012 at 7:19 PM, Rajeev Manur <rmanur@broadcom.com> wrote:
> Support!
>
> I have the following editorial comments,
>
> * Section 4.0
>     -- First line in third paragraph : FLG should be changed to FGL
>     -- Similar typo needs to be fixed in the 4th paragraph, LFG should be changed to FGL
> * Section 5.0

It would be sort of interesting to try to include all possible
permutations in the draft, but I think you are right and these should
be fixed.

>     -- Suggest changing the following sentence as below make the intent more explicit and remove ambiguity,
>
> Current: "The FGL ingress process MUST place the priority and DEI associated with an ingressed native frame in upper 4 bits of the Inner.Label Low Order part."
>
> New: "The FGL ingress process MUST copy the priority and DEI from an ingressed native frame to upper 4 bits of the Inner.Label Low Order part."

OK.

> * Section 7.0
>     -- I see reference to first and second part of FGL. In previous sections same fields are referred to as High and Low parts of FGL. It may be better to use one name consistently across the doc.

OK.

Thanks for the review and comments,
Donald
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> Thanks!
> --Rajeev
>
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> Hi,
>
> As announced at the TRILL WG meeting today, this starts a two week WG
> Last Call on draft-ietf-trill-fine-labeling ending 19 November.
>
> Thanks,
> Donald
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