[trill] FW: Mail regarding draft-ietf-trill-mtu-negotiation

"Susan Hares" <shares@ndzh.com> Fri, 13 January 2017 23:18 UTC

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Sue 

 

From: Susan Hares [mailto:shares@ndzh.com] 
Sent: Friday, January 13, 2017 6:13 PM
To: draft-ietf-trill-mtu-negotiation@ietf.org
Cc: draft-ietf-trill-mtu-negotiation@ietf.org; trill-chairs@ietf.org;
'Donald Eastlake'; 'Mingui Zhang'
Subject: Mail regarding draft-ietf-trill-mtu-negotiation

 

Minqui, Xudong, Donald, Radia, and Somnath: 

 

In double checking the draft-ietf-trill-mtu-neogitation-05.txt before
sending it to the IESG, I found 2 spelling errors and 2 places were the
sentence grammar could be improved. These are listed below.  Alia has
reviewed this draft so these changes can be taken care of after Alia has
reviewed again the text. 

 

Page 8, #2 leaving, #a sentence 3,  #b sentence 2 - spelling error 

 

Old:/orgiatingL1LSPBufferSize/ New:/originatingL1LSPBuffer Size/

 

Page 9, section 5, line 3 

OLD  /that port SHOULD be disabled and, in any case, an adjacency cannot be
formed/ 

New1 /that port SHOULD be disable since in any case an adjacency cannot be
formed/

New2 /that port SHOULD be disabled since, in any case, an adjacency cannot
be formed/

 

You can use either one of the NEWs 

 

Page 9, section 6, paragraph 2, line 2 

 

Old/but are processed normally if received larger than that./

New/but are processed normally if received larger than that size./ 

 

I asked for IESG publication as you will probably get more editorial
comments. 

 

Sue Hares

Shepherd