Re: [trill] AD review of draft-ietf-trill-address-flush-04

Donald Eastlake <d3e3e3@gmail.com> Tue, 23 January 2018 00:57 UTC

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Date: Mon, 22 Jan 2018 19:57:02 -0500
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Subject: Re: [trill] AD review of draft-ietf-trill-address-flush-04
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Hi Alia,

A -05 version has been posted fixing this and one other typo.

Thanks,
Donald
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On Mon, Jan 22, 2018 at 5:41 PM, Alia Atlas <akatlas@gmail.com> wrote:
> As is customary, I have done my AD review of
> draft-ietf-trill-address-flush-04.  First, I would like to thank the authors
> - Weiguo, Donald, Yizhou, and Mohammed - as well as the reviewers for a
> clear and well-written document.
>
> I have one minor concern to be fixed before IETF Last Call ends.  I have
> started IETF Last Call and placed the document on the February 8 IESG
> telechat.
>
> Minor:
>
> 1) Sec 2.2:  Please specify that the length is specified in octets.
>
> Regards,
> Alia