Re: [trill] [RTG-DIR] Routing directorate QA review of draft-ietf-trill-rbridge-multilevel

Donald Eastlake <d3e3e3@gmail.com> Thu, 04 August 2016 01:36 UTC

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From: Donald Eastlake <d3e3e3@gmail.com>
Date: Wed, 3 Aug 2016 21:36:25 -0400
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Subject: Re: [trill] [RTG-DIR] Routing directorate QA review of draft-ietf-trill-rbridge-multilevel
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On Wed, Aug 3, 2016 at 5:08 PM, Stig Venaas <stig@venaas.com> wrote:

> Hi
>
> The new version looks good to me. It addresses my comments and I see
> the draft has been improved further with additional changes.


Thanks,
Donald
===============================
 Donald E. Eastlake 3rd   +1-508-333-2270 (cell)
 155 Beaver Street, Milford, MA 01757 USA
 d3e3e3@gmail.com


> Stig
>
>
> On Tue, Aug 2, 2016 at 7:02 PM, Donald Eastlake <d3e3e3@gmail.com> wrote:
> > Hi Stig,
> >
> > As below, could you look at this draft to see if your comments have been
> > resolved?
> >
> > Thanks,
> > Donald
> > ===============================
> >  Donald E. Eastlake 3rd   +1-508-333-2270 (cell)
> >  155 Beaver Street, Milford, MA 01757 USA
> >  d3e3e3@gmail.com
> >
> > On Sat, Jun 4, 2016 at 6:36 PM, Donald Eastlake <d3e3e3@gmail.com>
> wrote:
> >>
> >> Hi Stig,
> >>
> >> https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-trill-rbridge-multilevel-03 has
> >> been uploaded with the comment resolutions below incorporated.
> >>
> >> Thanks,
> >> Donald
> >> ===============================
> >>  Donald E. Eastlake 3rd   +1-508-333-2270 (cell)
> >>  155 Beaver Street, Milford, MA 01757 USA
> >>  d3e3e3@gmail.com
> >>
> >>
> >> On Thu, May 26, 2016 at 12:23 AM, Donald Eastlake <d3e3e3@gmail.com>
> >> wrote:
> >> > Hi Stig,
> >> >
> >> > On Wed, May 25, 2016 at 3:26 PM, Alia Atlas <akatlas@gmail.com>
> wrote:
> >> >> Stig,
> >> >>
> >> >> Thank you very much for your review.  I'm also forwarding it to trill
> >> >> so
> >> >> that the WG can see it.
> >> >>
> >> >> Regards,
> >> >> Alia
> >> >>
> >> >> On Wed, May 25, 2016 at 2:28 PM, Stig Venaas <stig@venaas.com>
> wrote:
> >> >>>
> >> >>> Hi
> >> >>>
> >> >>> Sorry for being a bit late with this review. At least the document
> is
> >> >>> well written and easy to understand. There are no significant
> issues.
> >> >>>
> >> >>> I am wondering about the security considerations though. Are there
> >> >>> really no differences between the multi-level alternatives when it
> >> >>> comes to security?
> >> >
> >> > Well, I guess a couple sentences could be added that the choice of
> >> > using aggregated nicknames, and the resulting possible duplication of
> >> > nicknames between areas, increases the possibility of a TRILL Data
> >> > packet being delivered to the wrong egress RBridge if areas are
> >> > suddenly merged. However, is many cases the data would be discarded at
> >> > that egress because it would not match a known end station data label
> >> > / MAC address.
> >> >
> >> >>> I have two tiny editorial comments.
> >> >>>
> >> >>> Section 1.4 typo
> >> >>> RBridge - Routing Bridge, an alterntive name for a TRILL switch
> >> >>>                                                ^^^^^^^^^
> >> >
> >> > OK,
> >> >
> >> >>> Also, several places it says "non-zero" which is correct, but there
> >> >>> are some instances of "nonzero".
> >> >
> >> > Apparently both of those are correct but I agree the draft should use
> >> > one of them consistently. I'll replace the two instances of nonzero
> >> > with the hyphenated form.
> >> >
> >> > Thanks,
> >> > Donald
> >> > ===============================
> >> >  Donald E. Eastlake 3rd   +1-508-333-2270 (cell)
> >> >  155 Beaver Street, Milford, MA 01757 USA
> >> >  d3e3e3@gmail.com
> >> >
> >> >>> Stig
> >> >>>
> >> >>>
> >> >>> On Wed, May 4, 2016 at 11:52 PM, Jonathan Hardwick
> >> >>> <Jonathan.Hardwick@metaswitch.com> wrote:
> >> >>> > Hi Stig
> >> >>> >
> >> >>> >
> >> >>> >
> >> >>> > Please would you do a routing directorate QA review of
> >> >>> > draft-ietf-trill-rbridge-multilevel?
> >> >>> >
> >> >>> >
> >> >>> >
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-trill-rbridge-multilevel/
> >> >>> >
> >> >>> >
> >> >>> >
> >> >>> > Note that this is a “QA review.” The document is still being
> worked
> >> >>> > on
> >> >>> > by
> >> >>> > the TRILL working group.  The goal of this review is to provide a
> >> >>> > different
> >> >>> > perspective on the work and to improve its quality. Hence, your
> >> >>> > comments
> >> >>> > will be provided primarily for the benefit of the TRILL chairs and
> >> >>> > the
> >> >>> > document authors.
> >> >>> >
> >> >>> >
> >> >>> >
> >> >>> > Please could you provide your comments by May 20 and copy your
> >> >>> > comments
> >> >>> > to
> >> >>> > the rtg-dir list?
> >> >>> >
> >> >>> >
> >> >>> >
> >> >>> > The following web page contains a briefing on the QA process, and
> >> >>> > guidance
> >> >>> > for the QA reviewer.
> >> >>> >
> >> >>> > https://trac.tools.ietf.org/area/rtg/trac/wiki/RtgDirDocQa
> >> >>> >
> >> >>> >
> >> >>> >
> >> >>> > Please let me know whether you can do it, or not.
> >> >>> >
> >> >>> >
> >> >>> >
> >> >>> > Many thanks
> >> >>> >
> >> >>> > Jon
> >> >>> >
> >> >>> >
> >> >>> >
> >> >>> >
> >> >>> >
> >> >>> >
> >> >>> >
> >> >>> >
> >> >>>
> >> >>
> >> >>
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