Re: [trill] Last Call: <draft-ietf-trill-oam-req-04.txt> (Requirements for Operations, Administration and Maintenance (OAM) in TRILL (Transparent Interconnection of Lots of Links)) to Informational RFC

Donald Eastlake <d3e3e3@gmail.com> Wed, 19 December 2012 15:54 UTC

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From: Donald Eastlake <d3e3e3@gmail.com>
Date: Wed, 19 Dec 2012 10:54:21 -0500
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Subject: Re: [trill] Last Call: <draft-ietf-trill-oam-req-04.txt> (Requirements for Operations, Administration and Maintenance (OAM) in TRILL (Transparent Interconnection of Lots of Links)) to Informational RFC
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Hi Gayle,

On Tue, Dec 11, 2012 at 7:43 PM, gayle noble <windy_1@skyhighway.com> wrote:
> Very well written!! No spelling errors! No grammatical errors! Only one
> sentence, in my opinion,  could be rephrased for clarity
> 4.1. Data Plane
>  RBridges MUST have the ability to identify OAM frames destined for them or
> which require processing by the OAM plane from normal data frames.
> [Might be clearer if it was [RBridges MUST have the ability to identify OAM
> frames from normal data frames when the OAM frames are destined for them or
> require processing by the OAM plane.]]

Thanks for the praise!
I think that your suggested wording could be improved by replacing the
word "identify" with the word "distinguish".

Donald
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> gayle