Re: [trill] Shepherd review of draft-ietf-trill-mtu-negotiations-04.txt

Mingui Zhang <> Thu, 11 August 2016 06:29 UTC

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Hi Sue,

Thanks for the comments! Please take a look at my responses inline.

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Subject: Shepherd review of draft-ietf-trill-mtu-negotiations-04.txt

Status of draft: Ready for publication, a few editorial nits

Concerns:  None

WG Request/Reminder:  We'll need to make sure these parameters update the TRILL Yang data model.

Editorial NITs:

1.       Section 2 Page 5, before first paragraph
     The text would be clear if prior to the first paragraph beginning "lz is reported", you add a section header with: "operations" as title.

[Mingui] Yes, good point! This has been done in the attached 05 version.

2.       Section 3 page 6

Step 0, #2, b

Old:/Repeat step 1/ to
New: /Repeat/Do step 1/

I think the first time through, you have not gotten to Step 1:.

[Mingui] That's true.  I think it would also be fine if this phase (Do step 1) is deleted.

If this is not true, then this becomes a concern rather than a nit.

3.       Section 4, page 8, paragraph 0, sub-paragraph 2). Paragraph begins

/2) when an Rbridge/

It may be nice to explain why only equal is treated.

-          Less than Sz, it is not in campus

-          Greater than Sz, some other trill Rbridge has limiting size

-          Only if equal to Sz, it is possible that it changes Sz.

[Mingui] Yes, It's clearer. I have listed these three possibilities with three bullets.

Sue Hares

So, I will submit the 05 version if there is no objection to above responses.