Re: [trill] [RTG-DIR] Routing directorate QA review of draft-ietf-trill-rbridge-multilevel

Hi

The new version looks good to me. It addresses my comments and I see
the draft has been improved further with additional changes.

Stig

On Tue, Aug 2, 2016 at 7:02 PM, Donald Eastlake <d3e3e3@gmail.com> wrote:
> Hi Stig,
>
> As below, could you look at this draft to see if your comments have been
> resolved?
>
> Thanks,
> Donald
> ===============================
>  Donald E. Eastlake 3rd   +1-508-333-2270 (cell)
>  155 Beaver Street, Milford, MA 01757 USA
>  d3e3e3@gmail.com
>
> On Sat, Jun 4, 2016 at 6:36 PM, Donald Eastlake <d3e3e3@gmail.com> wrote:
>>
>> Hi Stig,
>>
>> https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-trill-rbridge-multilevel-03 has
>> been uploaded with the comment resolutions below incorporated.
>>
>> Thanks,
>> Donald
>> ===============================
>>  Donald E. Eastlake 3rd   +1-508-333-2270 (cell)
>>  155 Beaver Street, Milford, MA 01757 USA
>>  d3e3e3@gmail.com
>>
>>
>> On Thu, May 26, 2016 at 12:23 AM, Donald Eastlake <d3e3e3@gmail.com>
>> wrote:
>> > Hi Stig,
>> >
>> > On Wed, May 25, 2016 at 3:26 PM, Alia Atlas <akatlas@gmail.com> wrote:
>> >> Stig,
>> >>
>> >> Thank you very much for your review.  I'm also forwarding it to trill
>> >> so
>> >> that the WG can see it.
>> >>
>> >> Regards,
>> >> Alia
>> >>
>> >> On Wed, May 25, 2016 at 2:28 PM, Stig Venaas <stig@venaas.com> wrote:
>> >>>
>> >>> Hi
>> >>>
>> >>> Sorry for being a bit late with this review. At least the document is
>> >>> well written and easy to understand. There are no significant issues.
>> >>>
>> >>> I am wondering about the security considerations though. Are there
>> >>> really no differences between the multi-level alternatives when it
>> >>> comes to security?
>> >
>> > Well, I guess a couple sentences could be added that the choice of
>> > using aggregated nicknames, and the resulting possible duplication of
>> > nicknames between areas, increases the possibility of a TRILL Data
>> > packet being delivered to the wrong egress RBridge if areas are
>> > suddenly merged. However, is many cases the data would be discarded at
>> > that egress because it would not match a known end station data label
>> > / MAC address.
>> >
>> >>> I have two tiny editorial comments.
>> >>>
>> >>> Section 1.4 typo
>> >>> RBridge - Routing Bridge, an alterntive name for a TRILL switch
>> >>>                                                ^^^^^^^^^
>> >
>> > OK,
>> >
>> >>> Also, several places it says "non-zero" which is correct, but there
>> >>> are some instances of "nonzero".
>> >
>> > Apparently both of those are correct but I agree the draft should use
>> > one of them consistently. I'll replace the two instances of nonzero
>> > with the hyphenated form.
>> >
>> > Thanks,
>> > Donald
>> > ===============================
>> >  Donald E. Eastlake 3rd   +1-508-333-2270 (cell)
>> >  155 Beaver Street, Milford, MA 01757 USA
>> >  d3e3e3@gmail.com
>> >
>> >>> Stig
>> >>>
>> >>>
>> >>> On Wed, May 4, 2016 at 11:52 PM, Jonathan Hardwick
>> >>> <Jonathan.Hardwick@metaswitch.com> wrote:
>> >>> > Hi Stig
>> >>> >
>> >>> >
>> >>> >
>> >>> > Please would you do a routing directorate QA review of
>> >>> > draft-ietf-trill-rbridge-multilevel?
>> >>> >
>> >>> >
>> >>> > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-trill-rbridge-multilevel/
>> >>> >
>> >>> >
>> >>> >
>> >>> > Note that this is a “QA review.” The document is still being worked
>> >>> > on
>> >>> > by
>> >>> > the TRILL working group.  The goal of this review is to provide a
>> >>> > different
>> >>> > perspective on the work and to improve its quality. Hence, your
>> >>> > comments
>> >>> > will be provided primarily for the benefit of the TRILL chairs and
>> >>> > the
>> >>> > document authors.
>> >>> >
>> >>> >
>> >>> >
>> >>> > Please could you provide your comments by May 20 and copy your
>> >>> > comments
>> >>> > to
>> >>> > the rtg-dir list?
>> >>> >
>> >>> >
>> >>> >
>> >>> > The following web page contains a briefing on the QA process, and
>> >>> > guidance
>> >>> > for the QA reviewer.
>> >>> >
>> >>> > https://trac.tools.ietf.org/area/rtg/trac/wiki/RtgDirDocQa
>> >>> >
>> >>> >
>> >>> >
>> >>> > Please let me know whether you can do it, or not.
>> >>> >
>> >>> >
>> >>> >
>> >>> > Many thanks
>> >>> >
>> >>> > Jon
>> >>> >
>> >>> >
>> >>> >
>> >>> >
>> >>> >
>> >>> >
>> >>> >
>> >>> >
>> >>>
>> >>
>> >>
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