[trill] Fwd: Publication Requested: draft-ietf-trill-oam-req-04
Donald Eastlake <d3e3e3@gmail.com> Sun, 18 November 2012 23:47 UTC
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---------- Forwarded message ---------- From: Donald Eastlake <d3e3e3@gmail.com> Date: Sun, Nov 18, 2012 at 5:17 PM Subject: Publication Requested: draft-ietf-trill-oam-req-04 To: IESG Secretary <iesg-secretary@ietf.org>, Ralph Droms <rdroms.ietf@gmail.com> Cc: trill-chairs@tools.ietf.org Requirements for Operations, Administration and Maintenance (OAM) in TRILL (Transparent Interconnection of Lots of Links) draft-ietf-trill-oam-req-04 (1) What type of RFC is being requested (BCP, Proposed Standard, Internet Standard, Informational, Experimental, or Historic)? Informational, as indicated on the title page. This is a requirements documents, not a technical specification, but does include RFC 2119 language to indicate the requirements for a specification or specifications satisfying the requirements. (2) The IESG approval announcement includes a Document Announcement Write-Up. Please provide such a Document Announcement Write-Up. The approval announcement contains the following sections: Technical Summary: The TRILL protocol current supports SNMP and BFD but those provide only limited OAM facilities. This document is the first in a planned series of documents to provide more complete OAM facilities. It gives requirements for those OAM facilities and is expected to be followed by an OAM Framework document (currently a TRILL WG draft) which is in turn expected to be followed by two detailed specifications: Fault Management (current a personal draft) and Performance Management (no draft posted at this time). While the current direction of TRILL OAM is to parallel IEEE 802.1ag, this requirement document is general independent of OAM technology and does not constrain that direction. Working Group Summary: This document originated in the TRILL OAM design team. It was adopted by a strong consensus and reviewed by the WG. Changes were made based on review in the working group and there was a good consensus to forward it for publication. Document Quality: There is significant vendor interest in more complete OAM facilities for TRILL. This document has been thoroughly reviewed. It was originated in the TRILL OAM design team and has also been reviewed by a number of IEEE 802.1 voting members who volunteered to do so in their individual capacity. In addition, it was closely reviewed several times by Thomas Narten, a former Internet Area Director. Personnel: The Document Shepherd is Donald Eastlake. The Responsible Area Director is Ralph Droms. (3) Briefly describe the review of this document that was performed by the Document Shepherd. I read through the draft carefully right after reading the "Checklist for Internet-Drafts (IDs) submitted for RFC publication". I have found only few editorial glitches that have now been fixed and the nits listed in item 11 below. (4) Does the document Shepherd have any concerns about the depth or breadth of the reviews that have been performed? No. (5) Do portions of the document need review from a particular or from broader perspective, e.g., security, operational complexity, AAA, DNS, DHCP, XML, or internationalization? Operations Directorate review will be helpful and has been explicitly requested, as this is an OAM requirements document. (6) Describe any specific concerns or issues that the Document Shepherd has with this document that the Responsible Area Director and/or the IESG should be aware of? No special concerns. (7) Has each author confirmed that any and all appropriate IPR disclosures required for full conformance with the provisions of BCP 78 and BCP 79 have already been filed. Yes. (8) Has an IPR disclosure been filed that references this document? No. (9) How solid is the WG consensus behind this document? Does it represent the strong concurrence of a few individuals, with others being silent, or does the WG as a whole understand and agree with it? Not every TRILL WG participant is interested in or knowledgeable about OAM but there was wide support for the document. There has been explicit support by over a dozen WG participants and no one has posted either opposing the document as a whole or opposing advancement of the document. (10) Has anyone threatened an appeal or otherwise indicated extreme discontent? No. (11) Identify any ID nits the Document Shepherd has found in this document. (See http://www.ietf.org/tools/idnits/ and the Internet-Drafts Checklist). Boilerplate checks are not enough; this check needs to be thorough. There are three minor nits: [RFC4377] in not referenced in the body and should be removed from the references section. "draft-ietf-opsawg-oam-overview-06" in the references section is an old version -- probably the version number should just be removed from the partial file name. Lastly, the nits checker doesn't like it that the Authors' Addresses section is called "Contributing Authors". Also some of the entries in the Contributing Authors section are not separated by blank lines. (12) Describe how the document meets any required formal review criteria, such as the MIB Doctor, media type, and URI type reviews. No such formal reviews required. (13) Have all references within this document been identified as either normative or informative? Yes. (14) Are there normative references to documents that are not ready for advancement or are otherwise in an unclear state? No. (15) Are there downward normative references (see RFC 3967)? No. This is an informational document. (16) Will publication of this document change the status of any existing RFCs? No. (17) Describe the Document Shepherd's review of the IANA considerations section, especially with regard to its consistency with the body of the document. This is a requirements document and requires no IANA actions. (18) List any new IANA registries that require Expert Review for future allocations. None. (19) Describe reviews and automated checks performed by the Document Shepherd to validate sections of the document written in a formal language, such as XML code, BNF rules, MIB definitions, etc. None required. Thanks, Donald ============================= Donald E. Eastlake 3rd +1-508-333-2270 (cell) 155 Beaver Street, Milford, MA 01757 USA d3e3e3@gmail.com
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