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Re: [trill] FW: Mail regarding draft-ietf-trill-mtu-negotiation

Mingui Zhang <zhangmingui@huawei.com> Sat, 14 January 2017 01:11 UTC

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From: Mingui Zhang <zhangmingui@huawei.com>
To: Susan Hares <shares@ndzh.com>, "trill@ietf.org" <trill@ietf.org>
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Hi Sue,

Thanks for the checking. The changes are so incorporated into the updated version.  Ready to take more comments from the publication call.

Mingui

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Subject: [trill] FW: Mail regarding draft-ietf-trill-mtu-negotiation

Forwarding to trill mailing list.

Sue

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Subject: Mail regarding draft-ietf-trill-mtu-negotiation

Minqui, Xudong, Donald, Radia, and Somnath:

In double checking the draft-ietf-trill-mtu-neogitation-05.txt before sending it to the IESG, I found 2 spelling errors and 2 places were the sentence grammar could be improved. These are listed below.  Alia has reviewed this draft so these changes can be taken care of after Alia has reviewed again the text.

Page 8, #2 leaving, #a sentence 3,  #b sentence 2 - spelling error

Old:/orgiatingL1LSPBufferSize/ New:/originatingL1LSPBuffer Size/

Page 9, section 5, line 3
OLD  /that port SHOULD be disabled and, in any case, an adjacency cannot be formed/
New1 /that port SHOULD be disable since in any case an adjacency cannot be formed/
New2 /that port SHOULD be disabled since, in any case, an adjacency cannot be formed/

You can use either one of the NEWs

Page 9, section 6, paragraph 2, line 2

Old/but are processed normally if received larger than that./
New/but are processed normally if received larger than that size./

I asked for IESG publication as you will probably get more editorial comments.

Sue Hares
Shepherd

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