Re: [trill] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-trill-address-flush-05

Donald Eastlake <d3e3e3@gmail.com> Fri, 26 January 2018 20:51 UTC

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From: Donald Eastlake <d3e3e3@gmail.com>
Date: Fri, 26 Jan 2018 15:50:45 -0500
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Subject: Re: [trill] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-trill-address-flush-05
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HI Robert,

On Fri, Jan 26, 2018 at 3:29 PM, Robert Sparks <rjsparks@nostrum.com> wrote:

> Reviewer: Robert Sparks
> Review result: Ready
>
> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
> Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed
> by the IESG for the IETF Chair.  Please treat these comments just
> like any other last call comments.
>
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> <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>.
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> Document: draft-ietf-trill-address-flush-05
> Reviewer: Robert Sparks
> Review Date: 2018-01-26
> IETF LC End Date: 2018-02-05
> IESG Telechat date: 2018-02-08
>
> Summary: Ready for publication as a proposed standard
>
> micro-nit: Expand FGL on its first use in the introduction.
>

Thanks for the review. I've added an expansion of FGL to the Introduction
to the master sources so the next time a revision is uploaded, this will be
fixed.

Thanks,
Donald
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