Re: [trill] Last Call: <draft-ietf-trill-oam-req-04.txt> (Requirements for Operations, Administration and Maintenance (OAM) in TRILL (Transparent Interconnection of Lots of Links)) to Informational RFC

gayle noble <windy_1@skyhighway.com> Wed, 12 December 2012 00:43 UTC

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Subject: Re: [trill] Last Call: <draft-ietf-trill-oam-req-04.txt> (Requirements for Operations, Administration and Maintenance (OAM) in TRILL (Transparent Interconnection of Lots of Links)) to Informational RFC
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Very well written!! No spelling errors! No grammatical errors! Only one sentence, in my opinion,  could be rephrased for clarity
4.1. Data Plane
 RBridges MUST have the ability to identify OAM frames destined for them or which require processing by the OAM plane from normal data frames.
[Might be clearer if it was [RBridges MUST have the ability to identify OAM frames from normal data frames when the OAM frames are destined for them or require processing by the OAM plane.]]

gayle