[trill] Shepherd review of draft-ietf-trill-mtu-negotiations-04.txt

["Susan Hares" <[e-mail]>]

 

Status of draft: Ready for publication, a few editorial nits 

 

Concerns:  None 

 

WG Request/Reminder:  We'll need to make sure these parameters update the
TRILL Yang data model. 

 

Editorial NITs:

 

1.       Section 2 Page 5, before first paragraph 

     The text would be clear if prior to the first paragraph beginning "lz
is reported", you add a section header with: "operations" as title. 

 

2.       Section 3 page 6 

 

Step 0, #2, b 

 

Old:/Repeat step 1/ to 

New: /Repeat/Do step 1/ 

 

I think the first time through, you have not gotten to Step 1:. 

 

If this is not true, then this becomes a concern rather than a nit. 

 

3.       Section 4, page 8, paragraph 0, sub-paragraph 2). Paragraph begins 

 

/2) when an Rbridge/

 

It may be nice to explain why only equal is treated. 

 

-          Less than Sz, it is not in campus 

-          Greater than Sz, some other trill Rbridge has limiting size

-          Only if equal to Sz, it is possible that it changes Sz. 

 

Sue Hares