Re: [trill] Shepherd's review Review of draft-ietf-trill-rfc6439bis-02.txt
"Susan Hares" <shares@ndzh.com> Wed, 10 August 2016 19:31 UTC
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Subject: Re: [trill] Shepherd's review Review of draft-ietf-trill-rfc6439bis-02.txt
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Trill WG: I missed one other editorial change for RFC6439bis-02.txt. RFC7180 has been obsoleted by RFC7780. This needs to be changed. Sue From: trill [mailto:trill-bounces@ietf.org] On Behalf Of Susan Hares Sent: Wednesday, August 10, 2016 3:18 PM To: trill@ietf.org Cc: 'Donald Eastlake'; draft-ietf-trill-rfc6439bis@ietf.org; 'Jon Hudson' Subject: [trill] Shepherd's review Review of draft-ietf-trill-rfc6439bis-02.txt Status: Ready to publish Concerns: None Editorial nits: Section 2.2.1 - paragraph 6 sentence starting with /should the VLANs - it would help if the sentence was broken into to sentences. Section 4.0 - 4th paragraph - in the 1st numbered sub-paragraph - the sentence starting with /This is backward/ Is "backward compatible" correct English. My understanding is that it would "backwardly compatible" (adverb adjective-noun). This sentence would also benefit from breaking it in 2. Sue Hares
- Re: [trill] Shepherd's review Review of draft-iet… Susan Hares
- Re: [trill] Shepherd's review Review of draft-iet… Donald Eastlake
- Re: [trill] Shepherd's review Review of draft-iet… Donald Eastlake
- Re: [trill] Shepherd's review Review of draft-iet… Susan Hares
- [trill] Shepherd's review Review of draft-ietf-tr… Susan Hares