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Re: [trill] I-D Action: draft-ietf-trill-rbridge-mib-10.txt

Donald Eastlake <d3e3e3@gmail.com> Sat, 08 December 2012 22:12 UTC

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From: Donald Eastlake <d3e3e3@gmail.com>
Date: Sat, 08 Dec 2012 17:11:56 -0500
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Subject: Re: [trill] I-D Action: draft-ietf-trill-rbridge-mib-10.txt
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Hi Gayle,

Thanks for these editorial suggestions. This draft is currently in the
hands of the RFC Editor to whom I will forward these suggestions.

Donald
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On Sat, Dec 8, 2012 at 1:21 AM, gayle noble <windy_1@skyhighway.com> wrote:
> sorry got wrong header on this in last email - too much Dr. Who tonight
> (in my opinion) grammatical corrections to document
>
> Page 20
> rbridgeBasePortStpWiringCloset OBJECT-TYPE
> The value of this object MUST be retained across reinitializations
> [re-initializations] of the management system."
>
> Page 21
> rbridgeConfidenceNative OBJECT-TYPE
> The value of this object MUST be retained across reinitializations
> [re-initializations] of the management system."
>
> rbridgeConfidenceStatic OBJECT-TYPE
> The value of this object MUST be retained across reinitializations
> [re-initializations] of the management system."
>
> page 28
> rbridgeVlanDisableLearning OBJECT-TYPE
> The value of this object MUST be retained across reinitializations
> [re-initializations] of the management system."
>
> page 30
> rbridgeVlanPortAnnouncing OBJECT-TYPE
> The value of this object MUST be retained across reinitializations
> [re-initializations] of the management system."
>
> page 31
> As another example,frames [example, frames]discarded due to excessive frame
> size are reported in the port counter MTU Exceeded Discards in the Bridge
> MIB.
>
> page 32
> "The number of times a multidestination [multi destination] frame was
> dropped on this port because the RPF check failed.
>
> page 34
>  rbridgeEsadiEnable OBJECT-TYPE
> The value of this object MUST be retained across reinitializations
> [re-initializations] of the management system."
>
> page 35
> rbridgeEsadiDrbPriority OBJECT-TYPE
> The value of this object MUST be retained across reinitializations
> [re-initializations] of the management system."
>
> rbridgeEsadiDrbHoldingTime OBJECT-TYPE
> The value of this object MUST be retained across reinitializations
> [re-initializations] of the management system."
>
> page 37
>  rbridgeSnoopingPortAddrType OBJECT-TYPE
> "The IP address type of an IP multicast router detcted [detected]on this
> port and VLAN. If only IPv4 router(s) are detected, the value returned in
> [is]'ipv4'.
>
> page 39
> rbridgeDtreePriority OBJECT-TYPE
> The value of this object MUST be retained across reinitializations
> [re-initializations] of the management system."
>
> page 41
> rbridgeTrillMinMtuDesired OBJECT-TYPE
> The value of this object MUST be retained across reinitializations
> [re-initializations] of the management system."
>
>
> page 42
> rbridgeTrillMaxMtuProbes OBJECT-TYPE
> The value of this object MUST be retained across reinitializations
> [re-initializations] of the management system."
>
> thanks
> gayle
>
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