[Tsv-art] Tsvart last call review of draft-ietf-v6ops-transition-ipv4aas-11

[Martin Stiemerling <[e-mail]>]

Reviewer: Martin Stiemerling
Review result: Ready with Issues

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General issues:
- I have an issue with using RFC 2119 language in informative RFCs, as it is unclear
what normative language means in informative documents. However, I understand
that there is legacy from older documents in particular, but not limited to, RFC 7084.

- The document is in parts hard to read, even for someone who has a background in
IPv4/IPv6 transition. E.g. Section 1, 2nd paragraph, about what IP version is used
where. A figure could help here. 

Issues: 
- Remove the DEFAULT word and replace it with default. It is very confusing to add
capital letters normative language here. 

- Section 5: UPnP

This section is posing requirements in an IETF document that incorporates non-IETF
standards for a matter that is solely a recommendation. Can this be MUST at all? 

- Section 6: Code Considerations
This section is a collection of unfounded points without any hard proof that the
numbers are correct and tangible. Either there is a hard example on required
changes and added code size or remove it. This is an engineering document and not
a marketing document, isn't it?

Thanks,
 
  Martin Stiemerling