Re: [Tsv-art] Tsvart last call review of draft-ietf-babel-v4viav6-07

Juliusz Chroboczek <jch@irif.fr> Thu, 24 February 2022 16:41 UTC

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From: Juliusz Chroboczek <jch@irif.fr>
To: Joseph Touch <touch@strayalpha.com>
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> Reviewer: Joseph Touch
> Review result: Ready with Nits

Thanks for your review.

> - Section 3 refers to RFC7600 Section 22; it should refer to R-22 (the
> requirement number) in Section 4.8 of that RFC.

Fixed, thanks.

> - the word "since" throughout the doc (5 instances) may be more
> accurately expressed as "because" (indicating a logical consequence,
> rather than temporal precedence)

You're technically right; however, since such abuse is fairly standard,
I shall keep it as it is.

-- Juliusz