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Re: [Tsv-art] Tsvart last call review of draft-ietf-ipwave-ipv6-over-80211ocb-46

Suresh Krishnan <Suresh@kaloom.com> Thu, 04 July 2019 17:26 UTC

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From: Suresh Krishnan <Suresh@kaloom.com>
To: Joerg Ott <ott@in.tum.de>
CC: Nabil Benamar <n.benamar@est.umi.ac.ma>, Joerg Ott <jo@acm.org>, IETF Discussion <ietf@ietf.org>, "its@ietf.org" <its@ietf.org>, Russ Housley <housley@vigilsec.com>, "draft-ietf-ipwave-ipv6-over-80211ocb.all@ietf.org" <draft-ietf-ipwave-ipv6-over-80211ocb.all@ietf.org>, CARLOS JESUS BERNARDOS CANO <cjbc@it.uc3m.es>, "tsv-art@ietf.org" <tsv-art@ietf.org>
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Subject: Re: [Tsv-art] Tsvart last call review of draft-ietf-ipwave-ipv6-over-80211ocb-46
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Hi Joerg,
  I just want to respond to two of your comments. I will let the authors chime in on the other comments.

> On Jul 4, 2019, at 10:42 AM, Joerg Ott <ott@in.tum.de> wrote:
> ...
> I am sorry but this is not acceptable.  You are asking other people
> to read the document and comment on it.  As such, we may certainly
> expect that what we get to review in last call is ready for RFC.
> This document clearly is not.

Are their specific parts of the document that you are concerned about here on the clarity front? I have read the document and have not had any clarity issues (but that might be because I have been reading this for too long).

> ...
>>    Detailed comments:
>>    In several places, the text reminds of patent jargon. Should I
>>    worry? There doesn't appear
>>    to be any IPR disclosure.
> 
> Here, I'd really like to get an explicit response.

The authors have confirmed that they have filed any necessary IPR disclosures as per BCP78/79 as documented in the shepherd writeup.

Thanks
Suresh

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