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To: Michael Scharf <michael.scharf@hs-esslingen.de>, "tsv-art@ietf.org" <tsv-art@ietf.org>
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Subject: Re: [Tsv-art] Tsvart last call review of draft-ietf-dots-telemetry-19
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Hi Michael, 

Thank you for the review. 

Your review will be acknowledged in the next version: https://github.com/boucadair/draft-dots-telemetry/blob/master/draft-ietf-dots-telemetry.txt 

Cheers,
Med

> -----Message d'origine-----
> De : Michael Scharf via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org>
> Envoyé : dimanche 23 janvier 2022 15:14
> À : tsv-art@ietf.org
> Cc : dots@ietf.org; draft-ietf-dots-telemetry.all@ietf.org; last-
> call@ietf.org
> Objet : Tsvart last call review of draft-ietf-dots-telemetry-19
> 
> Reviewer: Michael Scharf
> Review result: Ready
> 
> This document has been reviewed as part of the transport area review
> team's ongoing effort to review key IETF documents. These comments were
> written primarily for the transport area directors, but are copied to
> the document's authors and WG to allow them to address any issues raised
> and also to the IETF discussion list for information.
> 
> When done at the time of IETF Last Call, the authors should consider
> this review as part of the last-call comments they receive. Please
> always CC tsv-art@ietf.org if you reply to or forward this review.
> 
> I have reviewed this document as TSV-ART reviewer. All in all, it is a
> well-written document, albeit with a somewhat atypical usage of YANG.
> 
> I have only reviewed the document regarding typical TSV-ART issues.
> As far as I can see, the document does not contain any major problem
> related to Internet transport protocols.
> 


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