[Tsv-art] Tsvart last call review of draft-ietf-manet-dlep-latency-extension-04

Michael Scharf via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> Mon, 01 July 2019 18:11 UTC

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Reviewer: Michael Scharf
Review result: Ready

This document has been reviewed as part of the transport area review team's
ongoing effort to review key IETF documents. These comments were written
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This is a short and straightforward document without any apparent impact on transport protocols.

As a purely editorial nit, I'd suggest expanding the acronym DLEP in the abstract.