Re: [Tsv-art] [art] Tsvart last call review of draft-nottingham-rfc7320bis-02

Joe Touch <touch@strayalpha.com> Tue, 03 December 2019 04:45 UTC

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From: Joe Touch <touch@strayalpha.com>
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Subject: Re: [Tsv-art] [art] Tsvart last call review of draft-nottingham-rfc7320bis-02
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Hi, Mark,

> On Dec 2, 2019, at 2:59 PM, Mark Nottingham <mnot@mnot.net> wrote:
> 
>> There is one significant issue related to this document that needs to be
>> addressed before it can proceed. There is an outstanding errata from RFC7320
>> that remains unresolved. The BCP index, markings in the datatracker for these
>> RFCs, and citations in this document are not aligned; that should be corrected
>> (in all three places) so the appropriate citation in this document does not
>> further propagate the error.
> 
> Yes - caught earlier and already fixed in source.

That fixes one of the three issues; there are two others. Is anyone fixing those?

(i.e., the BCP index and RFC metadata do not agree with each other).

Joe