Re: [Tsv-art] Tsvart last call review of draft-ietf-ipwave-ipv6-over-80211ocb-46

Nabil Benamar <n.benamar@est.umi.ac.ma> Mon, 08 July 2019 18:28 UTC

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From: Nabil Benamar <n.benamar@est.umi.ac.ma>
Date: Mon, 08 Jul 2019 19:28:54 +0100
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To: Joerg Ott <ott@in.tum.de>
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Subject: Re: [Tsv-art] Tsvart last call review of draft-ietf-ipwave-ipv6-over-80211ocb-46
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Hi Joerg,

Thank you for your email.

I received some minor comments that I will reflect in a new version -49 to
be posted tonight.







On Mon, Jul 8, 2019, 18:14 Joerg Ott <ott@in.tum.de> wrote:

> Hi Nabil,
>
> are there any other pending updates or is this one final concerning all
> the LC reviews?
>
> Best,
> Jörg
>
> On 08.07.19 07:45, Nabil Benamar wrote:
> > Hi Joerg,
> >
> > I have submitted -48 which fixes all issues you mentioned in your review.
> > Please have a look and let me know if this version is OK.
> >
> > Thank you.
> >
> > On Fri, Jul 5, 2019 at 12:23 PM Nabil Benamar <n.benamar@est.umi.ac.ma
> > <mailto:n.benamar@est.umi.ac.ma>> wrote:
> >
> >     Dear Joerg,
> >
> >     I want to add more clarification to one of your comments
> >
> >
> >         sect 4.6: Clarify "A subnet may be formed over 802.11-OCB
> >         interfaces of
> >         vehicles that are in close range (not by their in-vehicle
> >         interfaces)." further.
> >
> >
> >     The in-vehicle interface is the Ethernet interface of a Router
> >     situated in the car. By default, a Router has many and different
> >     interfaces. This Router(in the car) has an Ethernet interface
> >     (in-vehicle) and an 802.11-OCB interface.  That OCB interface has an
> >     antenna towards the outside of the car.
> >
> >     The subnet referred to by this text, is formed by the OCB interfaces
> >     (not the Ethernet interfaces - 'in-vehicle') of the cars nearby.
> >
> >     The 'in-vehicle' interface can be Ethernet, Bluetooth or even WiFi
> >     (WiFi onboard).
> >
> >
> >
> >
> >
> >
> >
> >     --
> >
> >     Best Regards
> >
> >     Nabil Benamar
> >     Associate Professor
> >     Department of Computer Sciences
> >     School of Technology
> >     Moulay Ismail University
> >     Meknes. Morocco
> >
> >
> >
> >
> > --
> >
> > Best Regards
> >
> > Nabil Benamar
> > Associate Professor
> > Department of Computer Sciences
> > School of Technology
> > Moulay Ismail University
> > Meknes. Morocco
> >
> >
>