Re: [Tsv-art] [rtcweb] Tsvart last call review of draft-ietf-rtcweb-ip-handling-11

[Justin Uberti <[e-mail]>]

Thanks for your comments. See below.

On Sun, Feb 17, 2019 at 9:56 AM Joseph Touch <[e-mail]> wrote:

> Reviewer: Joseph Touch
> Review result: Ready
>
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> This document has no significant transport issues.
>
> As a very minor issue, the document refers to the use of UDP "connect":
>
>    Once a suitable remote IP has been determined, the implementation can
>    create a UDP socket, bind it to the appropriate wildcard address, and
>    tell it to connect to the remote IP.  Generally, this results in the
>    socket being assigned a local address based on the kernel routing
>    table, without sending any packets over the network.
>
> It might be useful to be more clear that this is an OS command (not a
> protocol
> one). If the particular semantics of this command are relevant, that
> should be
> noted as well.
>

Agreed. Thoughts on what would make this clearer?