[Tsv-art] Tsvart telechat review of draft-ietf-detnet-architecture-11

Michael Scharf <michael.scharf@hs-esslingen.de> Thu, 07 February 2019 20:08 UTC

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Reviewer: Michael Scharf
Review result: Ready

This document has been reviewed as part of the transport area review team's
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This is a follow-up to my TSV-ART review of version of -08 of this document. I
have read again version -11.

The content of version -11 is a huge improvement. I'd like to thank the
authors, the document shepherd, and the tech advisor (David Black) for
addressing my main concerns.

Michael