[Tsv-art] Tsvart telechat review of draft-ietf-bmwg-ngfw-performance-13

Tommy Pauly via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> Thu, 20 January 2022 15:03 UTC

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Reviewer: Tommy Pauly
Review result: Ready

This document has been reviewed as part of the transport area review team's
ongoing effort to review key IETF documents. These comments were written
primarily for the transport area directors, but are copied to the document's
authors and WG to allow them to address any issues raised and also to the IETF
discussion list for information.

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Thanks to the authors for the updates in the latest revision to address the
comments from my last review!