Re: [Tsv-art] Tsvart telechat review of draft-ietf-dprive-padding-policy-05

Brian Haberman <brian@innovationslab.net> Mon, 11 June 2018 12:53 UTC

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Subject: Re: [Tsv-art] Tsvart telechat review of draft-ietf-dprive-padding-policy-05
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Magnus,
     Thanks for the review. I will await direction from the shepherding
AD as to when he would like to see this change made.

Regards,
Brian

On 6/11/18 8:49 AM, Magnus Westerlund wrote:
> Reviewer: Magnus Westerlund
> Review result: Ready with Nits
> 
> This is a follow up to the previous review:
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/review-ietf-dprive-padding-policy-04-tsvart-lc-westerlund-2018-04-04/
> 
> Thanks for resolving the previously raised issues.
> 
> I did notice in Section 4.1 that the following paragraph:
> 
>    The Block Size will interact with the MTU size.  Especially for
>    length values that are a large fraction of the MTU, unless the block
>    length is chosen so that a multiple just fits into the MTU, Block
>    Length Padding may cause unneccessary fragmentation for UDP based
>    delivery.  Also, chosing a block length larger than the MTU of course
>    forces to always fragment.
> 
> Is repeated with just one paragraph between them.
>