Re: [Tsv-art] Tsvart last call review of draft-ietf-rtgwg-policy-model-15
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From: Yingzhen Qu <yingzhen.qu@futurewei.com>
To: Tommy Pauly <tpauly@apple.com>, "tsv-art@ietf.org" <tsv-art@ietf.org>
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Subject: Re: [Tsv-art] Tsvart last call review of draft-ietf-rtgwg-policy-model-15
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Hi Tommy, Thank you for the review. Thanks, Yingzhen On 6/5/20, 6:57 AM, "Tommy Pauly via Datatracker" <noreply@ietf.org> wrote: Reviewer: Tommy Pauly Review result: Ready This document has been reviewed as part of the transport area review team's ongoing effort to review key IETF documents. These comments were written primarily for the transport area directors, but are copied to the document's authors and WG to allow them to address any issues raised and also to the IETF discussion list for information. When done at the time of IETF Last Call, the authors should consider this review as part of the last-call comments they receive. Please always CC tsv-art@ietf.org if you reply to or forward this review. This document is well-written and concise. From a transport perspective, all communication of data is handled by existing NETCONF and RESTCONF methods for transport (SSH and TLS), as noted in the Security Considerations.
- [Tsv-art] Tsvart last call review of draft-ietf-r… Tommy Pauly via Datatracker
- Re: [Tsv-art] Tsvart last call review of draft-ie… Yingzhen Qu