Re: [Tsv-art] [netmod] TSV-ART review of draft-ietf-netmod-acl-model-19
Sonal Agarwal <sagarwal12@gmail.com> Tue, 10 July 2018 18:27 UTC
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From: Sonal Agarwal <sagarwal12@gmail.com>
Date: Tue, 10 Jul 2018 11:26:59 -0700
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Subject: Re: [Tsv-art] [netmod] TSV-ART review of
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Hi Allison, Please see inline: Thanks, Sonal. On Mon, Jul 9, 2018 at 12:43 PM, Allison Mankin <allison.mankin@gmail.com> wrote: > I've reviewed this document as part of the transport area review team's > ongoing effort to review key IETF documents. These comments were written > primarily for the transport area directors, but are copied to the > document's authors for their information and to allow them to address any > issues raised. When done at the time of IETF Last Call, the authors should > consider this review together with any other last-call comments they > receive. Please always CC tsv-art@… if you reply to or forward this > review.. > > Summary: > Almost Ready (but I do have a question) > > Technicals: > I reviewed that the details about TCP, UDP, ECN, and DSCP are consistent > with the specifications, and that the specifications are accurate. The > model is accurate for these. > > > Question: > What is the use case for ACLs referencing TCP PSH and URG flags, and > sequence numbers? These are not very predictable and I would think not > very useful for the work that ACLs do, but I'm willing to be informed. > > [SA] The use case for this would be for applications that use ACL's and > require high levels of security. Enumerating all the supported flags and > their bit positions makes it clear to the user. These flags and the > sequence number are all part of the TCP header. > https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Transmission_Control_Protocol > > > > > _______________________________________________ > netmod mailing list > netmod@ietf.org > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/netmod > >
- [Tsv-art] TSV-ART review of draft-ietf-netmod-acl… Allison Mankin
- Re: [Tsv-art] [netmod] TSV-ART review of draft-ie… Sonal Agarwal
- Re: [Tsv-art] TSV-ART review of draft-ietf-netmod… Allison Mankin
- Re: [Tsv-art] TSV-ART review of draft-ietf-netmod… Sonal Agarwal