Re: [Tsv-art] Tsvart telechat review of draft-ietf-dprive-padding-policy-05

Alexander Mayrhofer <alex.mayrhofer.ietf@gmail.com> Mon, 11 June 2018 12:53 UTC

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Subject: Re: [Tsv-art] Tsvart telechat review of draft-ietf-dprive-padding-policy-05
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Magnus,

thanks for spotting that. This must have been a late stage editorial
mishap before i uploaded the XML. I will address this together with
other changes from the IESG evaluation.

best,
Alex


On Mon, Jun 11, 2018 at 2:49 PM, Magnus Westerlund
<magnus.westerlund@ericsson.com> wrote:
> Reviewer: Magnus Westerlund
> Review result: Ready with Nits
>
> This is a follow up to the previous review:
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/review-ietf-dprive-padding-policy-04-tsvart-lc-westerlund-2018-04-04/
>
> Thanks for resolving the previously raised issues.
>
> I did notice in Section 4.1 that the following paragraph:
>
>    The Block Size will interact with the MTU size.  Especially for
>    length values that are a large fraction of the MTU, unless the block
>    length is chosen so that a multiple just fits into the MTU, Block
>    Length Padding may cause unneccessary fragmentation for UDP based
>    delivery.  Also, chosing a block length larger than the MTU of course
>    forces to always fragment.
>
> Is repeated with just one paragraph between them.
>