Re: [Tsv-art] Tsvart last call review of draft-ietf-ipwave-ipv6-over-80211ocb-46

Joerg Ott <ott@in.tum.de> Mon, 08 July 2019 17:14 UTC

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Subject: Re: [Tsv-art] Tsvart last call review of draft-ietf-ipwave-ipv6-over-80211ocb-46
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Hi Nabil,

are there any other pending updates or is this one final concerning all
the LC reviews?

Best,
Jörg

On 08.07.19 07:45, Nabil Benamar wrote:
> Hi Joerg,
> 
> I have submitted -48 which fixes all issues you mentioned in your review.
> Please have a look and let me know if this version is OK.
> 
> Thank you.
> 
> On Fri, Jul 5, 2019 at 12:23 PM Nabil Benamar <n.benamar@est.umi.ac.ma 
> <mailto:n.benamar@est.umi.ac.ma>> wrote:
> 
>     Dear Joerg,
> 
>     I want to add more clarification to one of your comments
> 
> 
>         sect 4.6: Clarify "A subnet may be formed over 802.11-OCB
>         interfaces of
>         vehicles that are in close range (not by their in-vehicle
>         interfaces)." further.
> 
> 
>     The in-vehicle interface is the Ethernet interface of a Router
>     situated in the car. By default, a Router has many and different
>     interfaces. This Router(in the car) has an Ethernet interface
>     (in-vehicle) and an 802.11-OCB interface.  That OCB interface has an
>     antenna towards the outside of the car.
> 
>     The subnet referred to by this text, is formed by the OCB interfaces
>     (not the Ethernet interfaces - 'in-vehicle') of the cars nearby.
> 
>     The 'in-vehicle' interface can be Ethernet, Bluetooth or even WiFi
>     (WiFi onboard).
> 
> 
> 
> 
> 
> 
> 
>     -- 
> 
>     Best Regards
> 
>     Nabil Benamar
>     Associate Professor
>     Department of Computer Sciences
>     School of Technology
>     Moulay Ismail University
>     Meknes. Morocco
> 
> 
> 
> 
> -- 
> 
> Best Regards
> 
> Nabil Benamar
> Associate Professor
> Department of Computer Sciences
> School of Technology
> Moulay Ismail University
> Meknes. Morocco
> 
>