Re: [Tsv-art] [EXT] [Ntp] Tsvart last call review of draft-ietf-ntp-packet-timestamps-08

Ian Swett <ianswett@google.com> Tue, 03 March 2020 09:10 UTC

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From: Ian Swett <ianswett@google.com>
Date: Tue, 3 Mar 2020 04:10:19 -0500
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To: Ulrich Windl <Ulrich.Windl@rz.uni-regensburg.de>
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Subject: Re: [Tsv-art] [EXT] [Ntp] Tsvart last call review of draft-ietf-ntp-packet-timestamps-08
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"could" is fine by me.  I was pointing out the potential confusion, but I'm
not committed to my particular text proposal.

On Tue, Mar 3, 2020 at 2:09 AM Ulrich Windl <
Ulrich.Windl@rz.uni-regensburg.de> wrote:

> >>> Ian Swett via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> schrieb am 02.03.2020 um
> 17:47 in
> Nachricht
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> <25708_1583167660_5E5D38AC_25708_855_1_158316762892.27374.16780761185123723332@i
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> [...]
> > Section 9, Security Considerations
> >
> > The sentence beginning with "Timestamps can be spoofed or modified..."
> > implies
>
> What about a simple "could" instead of "can"? Actually I see no problem
> with the original sentence as long it doesn't read "Timestamps are spoofed
> and modified..."
>
> [...]
>
> Regards,
> Ulrich
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