[tsvwg] AD Evaluation comments on draft-ietf-tsvwg-datagram-plpmtud-14

Magnus Westerlund <magnus.westerlund@ericsson.com> Mon, 17 February 2020 13:45 UTC

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From: Magnus Westerlund <magnus.westerlund@ericsson.com>
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Subject: [tsvwg] AD Evaluation comments on draft-ietf-tsvwg-datagram-plpmtud-14
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Hi,

 

I have done my AD review by going through the AD Review checklist and
looking at the changes since my WG LC review. Issues that I have found this
time are the following.

 

1. Missing Updates: So this documents respecifies how one perform PLPMTUD
for SCTP over different lower layers. Despite that only RFC 4960 is updated.
Looking at Section 6.2.2 and 6.2.3 I think there is a point of actually
updating also RFC 6951 and RFC 8261. Both have their own specifications for
Path MTU D and do not rely solely on either 4960 or RFC 4821. Thus, I think
it would be good to update also these documents. Or what is the authors and
WG's view on this? 

 

2. Can you please update the revision of the QUIC transport reference:

== Outdated reference: A later version (-25) exists of

     draft-ietf-quic-transport-20

 

Otherwise I believe this document ready for IETF last call. I put the
datatracker into revised ID needed based on 1. 

 

Cheers

 

Magnus Westerlund