Re: [tsvwg] FW: New Version Notification for draft-johansson-cc-for-4g-5g-00.txt

"Smith, Kevin, (R&D) Vodafone Group" <Kevin.Smith@vodafone.com> Fri, 23 October 2015 14:17 UTC

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From: "Smith, Kevin, (R&D) Vodafone Group" <Kevin.Smith@vodafone.com>
To: Bob Briscoe <ietf@bobbriscoe.net>, Ingemar Johansson S <ingemar.s.johansson@ericsson.com>
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Thanks Bob, makes good sense.
Kevin

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From: Bob Briscoe [mailto:ietf@bobbriscoe.net] 
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Subject: Re: [tsvwg] FW: New Version Notification for draft-johansson-cc-for-4g-5g-00.txt

Kevin,

Thx for yr review. I also found Ingemar's doc v useful and timely - I will be sending my own review shortly (minus some of the nits you already found).
One comment on yr comments...

On 19/10/15 11:07, Smith, Kevin, (R&D) Vodafone Group wrote:
> Because of the above it is a good practice to keep the amount of data 
> in flight as small as possible, without sacrificing throughput.
>> amount of data means number of packets (per text in following paragraph) - maybe worth changing to 'number of packets in flight'
I suggest this is left as "amount of data", because it is bytes not packets that is of concern.
However, it is a bit of a cryptic sentence anyway. It would be more straightforward to say "to keep RTT (and therefore queues) to a minimum", which is the only way to minimise the amount of data in flight without reducing throughput.



Bob

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