Re: [tsvwg] Fwd: I-D Action: draft-ietf-tsvwg-transport-encrypt-09.txt

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small nit, Page 2:

"As discussed in [RFC7258], Pervasive Monitoring (PM) nis a technical"

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> On Nov 3, 2019, at 22:09, Gorry Fairhurst <gorry@erg.abdn.ac.uk> wrote:
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> We've just posted a revision following the WGLC comments...
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> Gorry
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> -------- Original Message --------
> Subject: 	[tsvwg] I-D Action: draft-ietf-tsvwg-transport-encrypt-09.txt
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> A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts directories.
> This draft is a work item of the Transport Area Working Group WG of the IETF.
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>        Title           : Considerations around Transport Header Confidentiality, Network Operations, and the Evolution of Internet Transport Protocols
>        Authors         : Godred Fairhurst
>                          Colin Perkins
> 	Filename        : draft-ietf-tsvwg-transport-encrypt-09.txt
> 	Pages           : 47
> 	Date            : 2019-11-03
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> Abstract:
>   To protect user data and privacy, Internet transport protocols have
>   supported payload encryption and authentication for some time.  Such
>   encryption and authentication is now also starting to be applied to
>   the transport protocol headers.  This helps avoid transport protocol
>   ossification by middleboxes, while also protecting metadata about the
>   communication.  Current operational practice in some networks inspect
>   transport header information within the network, but this is no
>   longer possible when those transport headers are encrypted.  This
>   document discusses the possible impact when network traffic uses a
>   protocol with an encrypted transport header.  It suggests issues to
>   consider when designing new transport protocols, to account for
>   network operations, prevent network ossification, and enable
>   transport evolution, while still respecting user privacy.
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> The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-tsvwg-transport-encrypt/
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> There are also htmlized versions available at:
> https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-tsvwg-transport-encrypt-09
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-tsvwg-transport-encrypt-09
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> A diff from the previous version is available at:
> https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-tsvwg-transport-encrypt-09
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> Please note that it may take a couple of minutes from the time of submission
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